Yaakov's Sensory Image Paragraph

CLAP!!!!!!!!!! I didn't know what I was hearing. BOOM!!!!!!!!!! Everything started to shake. The ground rumbled. Everything was spinning out of control. I couldn't find anyone. I couldn't see. All I could do was stand there. But if you know me, I'm the kind of person that doesn't give up so easily. The wind began to blow even harder than before. Was this really true. Can this actually be happening. Then I thought I have found myself in the middle of Hurricane Katrina.

Leor's Sensory Image Paragraph

Suddenly the wind changed, a storm was coming. The thunder crashed, casting an eerie echo, soon after it the bright yellow lightning danced in the sky. Rain started falling as I tasted the sweet water on my tongue. I had to get home before it got worse. I ran home as fast as my legs could take me. My parents were waiting for me, worried sick, at the door. I rushed up to my room, got in bed, and covered myself with the warm, soft blanket. As I watched the waves crash violently onto shore and the dark clouds cover the grey sky like a rough blanket I thought to myself: I am safe.

Adi's Sensory Image Paragraph

It was a freezing winter day, and by night there was thunder and lightning. I was only four years-old, and miserably frightened. Alone in my family's cabin in northern Canada, and I was hiding under the worm think blankets of my bed. I heard the waves crushing onto the beach sounding like thunder. Then the rain started, it was raining buckets outside, and it sounded like nails were dropping on the ground and into the roof. The winds came very strongly like giant is blowing on the town. Crash! Boom! The big old tree next to our cabin fell on top of it! I felt the strong wind on my face as I came out of the blankets. The winds were too strong I could not handle them, and then I fell done.

Jamie's Polished Sensory Image Paragraph

Finally! The airplane is taking off, I’m going to Israel. The deafening noise of the engines was making my teeth rattle in my head and my seat vibrates, I felt as if there was an earthquake made just for me! Suddenly, the airplane tipped and dived, there was a huge grey storm cloud right ahead of us! It looked like a big puffy pompom, but very solid. After I got a glimpse of the cloud, I didn’t see any more, just the ground coming, very fast, up towards us.
The thing that woke me up was the foul smell of burning rubber and metal. I could see bubble forming in the paint that was cracking. I couldn’t believe it, I was the only one there! Where did everyone go?
I sat up sweating, my heart pounding in my chest like a hammer on nails. I was stuck in a large cocoon and couldn’t get out. I wasn’t on the airplane anymore but I was still hearing the noise, what was going on? Finally I understood, it was just a dream! It was the rumbling of the storm that made me think of an airplane, I also felt the vibrations because, well, there was an earthquake! I just woke up from a nightmare, only to find myself in another one!

Gil's polished sensory paragraph

I hear the super strong waves in the water. I felt the freezing cold water on my face and on my finger. When I tasted the water. it tasted HORRIBLE. I asked my dad if we could go for ice cream when we got there the ice cream smelled like HEAVEN. When I saw the chocolate and vanilla ice cream I fell to the solid cold ground and fainted. It just smelled so good. I was so happy I made my dad buy every single one of them. Then I tasted all of the flavors. Then I fainted again.

Polished Sensory Image Paragraph

I went to swim in the ocean with my friends. We suddenly heard thunder. It started pouring rain. All I could think about twas getting back to land. The sound of the running water and thunder was driving me insane. I couldn’t find Ashley or Hana. I couldn’t see anybody. The salt in the water was getting in my mouth. The waves were crashing down on me, my legs were numb. I couldn’t move. I was slowly sinking. Why didn’t I tell my mom where I went?