does the essay map count as marks on the actuall project

Hey Mr. g what periods are the entrepreneur class and also I could not get on my computer until now so I hope I can get my essay map done but if not here's a warning about not completing it. BYE

Question for essay maps

Hi Mr. Gelmon

I know Isabelle already asked What do you do for the conclusion on the blog but I still don't get it. Because you said you don't put your whole essay on your map, just notes. And I don't really have an introduction paragraph so I can't wrap it up.

Please Help!

From,
Shak

PS: If no one comments please help me tomorrow in class

Hair day

Hey guys does anyone know when Crazy Hair Day is?

Danny

Essay map

Hey 

I didn't really understand what we were supposed to write in the conclusion box on our essay map.

If anyone could comment it would be great!

Thanks,

Isabelle

Question???

Dear all,

I was discussing an idea with my dad for the entrepreneur's fair, and I was wondering if you could buy a make it yourself kit, what would it be for? Also tell me what you think of my idea.

Thank you,

Bram

p.s.:Nobody likes a copycat.

Hi Mr. G. I did my essay map on a different topic, because I was not done my Japan essay. So maybe when I finish my essay could I get the map to you.

A Poems First Draft (by Bram)

A little early to write about this, but please comment. Thanks.

School's Out

School is cool
So is the pool
Homework is an annoyance
Rafts are buoyant
Recess is fun
Swimming in the sun
Band practice is early
Off the diving board I do a twirly
The library has lots of books
In the pool there is no crooks
School is out
Now lets scream and shout
Summer is here
3 2 1 cheer
Jump in the pool
School is out you fool
School will come back
Not for 2 months Jack
You're right my friend
School is not right around the bend

What do you think.

-Bram

Homework

• Essay map for Japan essay (Mon)
• Spelling Chart
  

If you would like to type your essay on the computer, go here:

http://www.readwritethink.org/materials/essaymap/

Mr. G the date for our Japan project is March 12 or 13.

Thanks

Homework

Social Studies Project
-Make sure you are building a solid persuasive argument for your part of the debate as well as preparing for your Japan topic.

Enjoy your day off school!

Baseball is the Best Team Sport

 

Baseball is the best team sport because everyone has to do their job or else the game won’t flow properly, and everyone uses their own unique talent to contribute their part for the team. For example, if your teammates didn’t work together it would be harder to advance the ball to where you wanted it to go.

In baseball, the players usually specialize in a position and have different qualities that can help the team win.  For example, the pitcher has to throw the ball in different ways to increase his or her chance of getting it passed the batter.

In baseball you have to have 9 players to fill the positions on the field, and if you don’t, you won’t move the ball as fast as you usually would with 9, which would increase your chance of losing.

Basketball, soccer, and hockey are all team sports but in hockey and the other sports I listed you can take the ball/puck the whole way up the field/court. In baseball you can’t run with the ball and chase the other team around, so you have to relay it around to get the ball to the teammate closest to the opponent to get them out. And that’s how I know that baseball is the best team sport.

-Benny

Question for Persuasion Maps

Hi Mr. G,

I was wondering if instead of "baseball is not the best team sport to play" I could do: "Basketball [or any other sport] is better than baseball".

Please answer in the comment box.
PLEASE COMMENT AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!

From,
Shak

Homework

Hey all,
It's Jonah. I was not here for the afternoon. Can someomne in 6A tell me what I missed in Mr. Gelmon's afternoon class and Mr. Lee afternoon class?

PLEASE COMMENT AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!!

Thanks

Jonah

Persuasion maps...

Hey mr.g i was wondering if i can do my map on football instead of baseball please comment soon

-micah

The child that is gone.

Hey everyone this is my first draft on my poem that I worked on this weekend.

I hope you like it. Please comment 

Here is my hand upon the wall

If you stab it blood will fall

As the blood fled 

The child was dead

Now the living know that he is gone

And we know what we have done wrong

Here is my hand upon the wall 

If you stab it blood will fall

As the blood fled the child was

Dead

Homework

1. Spelling Test tomorrow
2. Persuasion Map for: Baseball is the best/not the best team sport to play

The online map is here: http://www.readwritethink.org/materials/persuasion_map/

P.S.

Also somebody in 6B please tell me what we're doing in class.

Thanks,

Bram

Sick

Hey all,

I'm sick today. I awoke with a slight fever. I'll probably be back tomorrow, or on Wednesday. If somebody could tell me the homework, including stuff from Mr. Lee, please put in the comment box.

Thank you,

Bram

Mr. Lee

sorry Mr.gelmon this isnt about language arts but if anyone knows for the barrel part do we have to find as many or what ever we want.
please comment as soon as possible



thanx sharon