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hi guys do we have a hebrew test tomorrow.

RESPONCE TO LITTLE BOY

HI guys could you please comment on my poem

I like the poem the little boy because I think that it was fascinating at the end. Because the little boy's former teacher dulled his imagination. When the little boy got into his seat the teacher told the class that today we are going to draw pictures, yes said the little boy. "I like drawing pictures "so the little boy drew a picture but the teacher said wait, I will show you how to draw a flower with a stem. So the little boy liked his own so he decided to draw the teacher flower. Later in the years the little boy moved to another school and enjoyed his time at the new school. $$$$

RESPONCE TO FAT MAN

HI guys could you please comment on my poem.

This poem is about two men trying to hike up a mountain. One of the men criticizes the other man for the he looks, he wonders to himself how a fat man like him can get so fat and try to attempt to clime a mountain. When the fat man passes by he sees what is written on his tee-shirt, and fells ashamed of what he thought earlier. The point of this story is not to judge people by the way they look but by the way they are.