adam and eli show 2

adam and eli show Hanukkah episode

Skoon Pa




You come in
on your frigid flight
then you take
me out each night

No matter what mom say’s
we go out
with out a doubt

We play, laugh
and have fun
we are always on the run
day in and day out, rain or shine

I wait for the next day
over and over again
without saying a word
for that day

I wait for more
though,
just to go to the store


I dread that odious day
the day that you leave
and when you are gone
I know I have done wrong

Then I look back
and react
because now I know that
you love me

And that one word I forgot
to say
hits me
so hear me today
all I want to say
is......................... Thank You




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p.s. Skoon Pa means grandpa in africkans

explenations for Rena Ikeda

copious-plentiful
debonair-charming
swarthy-dark
cuff-African American
pluck-courage
athwart-across
brine-sea water
vaunting-bragging
plied-used
dolefully-sadly
gaudy-showy
fain-gladly
dower-gift
avowed-admitted
durst-dared
flout-scorn
chide-scold
guerdon-reward
Arch Fear-death
arrears-overdue debt
rapture-joy
-Arieh

Ren Ikeda

Please give feedback

Ren Ikeda had copious amounts of money
Ren Ikeda was a debonair swarthy cuff
Ren Ikeda had great amounts of pluck
Ren Ikeda lived athwart the brine
Ren Ikeda enjoyed vaunting about the money he plied
Ren Ikeda was dolefully gaudy and rarely fain gave a dower
Ren Ikeda avowed that what he did was not right
People never durst flout or chide Ren Ikeda
Ren Ikeda never dreamed of getting a guerdon
Dolefully when Ren Ikeda met Arch Fear
People realized Ren Ikeda had arrears
With rapture they fain through Ren Ikeda’s body into the brine

-Arieh

Each different little sprinkle-Draft 1

Hey guys,
This is my first draft of each little sprinkle. I wrote it for my uncle who just got married 2 months ago. I really need your opinion on it!(comments)
Thanks alot

Janine

Each litle diifferent sprinkle
on a cupcake symbolizes
somthing we all should
know

Blue, The time of
sadness for when
you need
comforting

Red, the feeling of
anger when you
need to
explode

Grey , the time when
you need help
because your
sick

Yellow, feeling happy
and excited, jumping
around a lot
too

White, the time to
relax in your
own quiet and peaceful
room

Pink, The feeling of
love from when you
very first
met

-Janine-

6A homework

Secret poem final draft due Friday and explanation

BRING COMIC BOOKS FOR FREAD.