Sunday, May 4, 2008

music poem draft 1

I guys tell me how you like this poem. PLEASE! If anyone can give me ideas for a good title and some way to end the last stanza but still to keep it rhyming.

music through my ear
what else can I hear
with the bark
of linkin park
as I use the beat
of my feet
to dance along
to this awesome song
as I dance along
to this awesome song
I pass bye
and catch some eyes
as my ears are blasting
to this song that is ever lasting
I listen to the final words
and look outside at the birds
as the birds tweet away
to the beat that plays
the song ends

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Food Bank: Collecting food for people who can't afford it.

Diabetes: To promote the health of Canadians.

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