Marko
Thank you for the comment Mr. G I think this is better
The Japanese invented this weapon for hatred, and I believe that is wrong. I think death should be natural not by machines and bullets. I also think desperation should never be a reason to kill someone, or to kill your self. But there are many other people who disagree with my thoughts, like the people of the kamikaze and the military who would give their lives up for their country. Thank you!
Wednesday, March 12, 2008
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Random Japan essay question
Hey everyone,
Im editing my essay and I found a little glitch...If I were to say 'Ori is the Japanese term for folding' would I capatalize the J in Japan or would I leave it lower case?
Thanks
Nini
Essay
Hi
Mr. Gelmon I wrote my essay and my essay map but what happens if i do not come tomorrow to school because I do not want to get marks off!
please reply
thank you
Melody
hi Mr. G is this ok
is this ending paragraph for my kamakzie essay ok
The Japanese invented this weapon for hatred, and I believe that is wrong. Death should be natural not by machines and bullets. Desperation should never be a reason to kill someone, or to kill your self. Thank you!
Simple example of expository essay
Here is an example of a five paragraph essay. Pay attention to the colours!
My favorite pet is my dog, Romeo. He is beautiful and easy to care for. Playing with him is lots of fun. He always takes care of me. I have never had a better pet.
Romeo is beautiful and easy to care for. He is a tricolor Sheltie, mostly black with white and a bit of brown. Caring for him is easy because I simply have to make sure he has fresh water and food every day. I exercise him by throwing his toys. Because he is good looking and doesn’t require much care Romeo is a good pet.
Romeo is lots of fun to play with. He loves to play catch. He follows me around the house with a toy and drops it on my foot so I will toss it. He can catch just about anything, but his favorite is chasing a Frisbee. I really have fun playing with Romeo.
Romeo takes care of me. He always follows me when I leave a room. When I am sitting on a couch he plops down right beside me. On sunny days when we are hiking in the woods he always makes sure that I keep up with the rest of the family. He always watches out for me.
As you can see, Romeo is a great pet. I am proud of him and he doesn’t require much care. Playing with him is very pleasurable. I am always safe because he watches over me. Romeo is a wonderful pet.
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