Tuesday, March 24, 2009

How many sentences do you have to have for your comic?

The Escape captions

1) Marc gets manure in his face so he takes a shower. Jae sees him in the shower. Marc gets a bit embarrassed because he is naked. Jae asks Marc why he is tacking a shower and Marc replies by telling her the story of getting the manure in his face. Jae starts laughing and Marc gets angry, he pretends to throw Jae into the slurry pit. After Jae is angry so she tries to slap him, she misses and falls into the slurry pit.

2) A German officer comes into Mr. Clark, Paul and Rosie’s apartment to get important documents from Mr. Clarke. Suddenly Jae pulls out a knife and stabs the officer.

3) While the orphanage is on fire because the German’s bombed it, Marc runs away to Paris. Before he goes, he goes into director Thomas’ room and takes money, a bike, a pigskin bag and food to survive.

4) While Paul, Rosie and Mr. Clarke are at the city square an air bombing comes down. They make it out ok. While they are running Rosie notices a big patch of blood on their fathers shirt. Rosie asks what it is Mr. Clarke replies shrapnel. A few minutes later Mr. Clarke falls down and whispers “find Mr. Henderson” before he dies.

5) Marc finds a house to stay in. After a few days in the house the Gestapo break in because that house belongs to Mr. Henderson who is a British spy that helped steal important documents from the Germans. While they are in the house they find Marc and torture him. When Marc tells them all that he knows the Gestapo think he is lying so they rip out his tooth. Finally the Herr Oberst knew he was telling the truth. A phone call suddenly comes through. Potente picks up pretending to be Henderson. It was Paul and Rosie, thinking that this was Henderson they tell him where they are and that they have the documents.

6) Paul and Rosie are walking and they see a boy named Hugo who they met earlier on when their dad died. He leads them to the church to stay in.

7) Henderson comes back to his house and finds Marc. He helps him get better then he takes him with him on his mission to go assassinate Mannstein so he can’t make the documents again.

8) Potente comes to the church as the fake Henderson. When he is inside they ask him a bunch of questions. One of the questions was did you and our father go on the Manchester P.F. and Potente replies yes. Mr. Clarke told his kids that he only went on one boat in his life with Mr. Henderson that boat was called the S.S. Cardiff. Yvette the sister of the church pulls out a shotgun and shoots three times. Hugo tries to run but the bullets also hit him. At the end Hugo and Potente die.

9) Henderson and Marc highjack a truck and they drive for a day to get to the church. When they get to the church they meat Paul and Rosie. After they talked for a while father Doran comes to tell them that there is beds for them to stay the night. The next day they leave to get to a boat that will take them to England.

10) The next day they get to the boat. They hurry up the stairs to enter. When the head of the boat asks for their passports. Paul and Rosie show their passports, but Marc doesn’t have one. The head of the boat said that there is a passport place that is a 2-minute walk to get to. Henderson decides to stay the night with Marc so the next morning they can get Marc a passport.

11) While the boat is going, the Germans suddenly bomb it. The boat sinks. Rosie holds onto Paul for her life. The current pulls Rosie and Paul apart. They go to different places, they don’t know where the other one is. Rosie meets a stranger who helps her get to shore.