Saturday, March 15, 2008

The Beach

Hi everyone,

I started writing a poem but I am stuck and I don't know what to write next.

Here it is:

Playing in the sand

making an island

out of shovels and pails

watching the fish’ scales


Looking at the sea

not so far away from me

the waves

crashing against the

seashore


From,
Shak

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