Hi Nini,
You've chosen a topic that poets have been writing about for generations: inspiration!
You are beginning to develop your voice in your poems, which is a big step for writers. My challenge for you is to use every line and stanza break to your advantage. Some of your chosen words are so powerful that they deserve a line of their own. I'll leave you to choose which ones those are.
As always, thanks for sharing your work!
-Mr. G.
Wednesday, November 21, 2007
Nini's poem
Posted by Adam Gelmon at 7:14 PM
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