Into the Heart
Between fields and seas
Hard to imagine
What happened here
Men blessed by heaven
With stories untold
Unable to distinguish
Between the chapters of pain
They lived with
The scars they carried
Despite
The Men with Guns
Between fields and seas
Hard to imagine
What happened here
Men blessed by heaven
With stories untold
Unable to distinguish
Between the chapters of pain
They lived with
The scars they carried
Despite
The Men with Guns
4 comments:
i like the extra line you put in mark good job.
wow
-micah
Marc your poems keep on getting better and better your skills are definatly enhancing greatly
-Arieh
Wow. This was good. I have nothing else to say. Keep going. It was amazing. It's missing something, but I can't think what, I'm too blown away. Maybe you'll discover it in your lifetime, the thing which is missing. But for now, let me bask in the greatness of this piece of writing.
~Nomi, Grade 12, Lord Byng Secondary
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