Monday, December 3, 2007

Stages of life

Hi everyone, please comment on this poem because it means alot to me and I worked hard on it.

Your stages of life are
your symbols of life
and your only
memories too

Babies, for the truth their
useless, all they do is
cry, poo and drink
their bottles

But remember, you were
useless at some point too

Toddlers, they bring joy to
people learning how to
walk, talk an eat
proper food

But remember you were learning
how to walk, talk and eat too

Kids, they have their own
imagination and they
start their years
of school

But remember, you once and still
have an imagination of your own

Teenagers, theyre in high school and
they start having much
more homework
from school

But remember, you once
got alot of homework

Adults, getting married and findings
carriers, the point where
you find the purpose
of life

But remember, you once
found the purpose of life too

Grandparents, they have grandchildren and
give presents to them
and the have kids that
love them

Your stages of life are
your symbols of life
and your only

-Janine
memories too

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

It is a great poem. You might want to cut some stuff out because it kand of loses it's affect on you. Otherwise it was an awsome poem.

Marc L. said...
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