Heaven
Where is it
Is it really true or
Do they just say it because they don’t want us to feel bad
Are you able to communicate
Are you able to think
Can you do everything you can do here
Or is it just your inside that leaves
Is it up in the clouds
Is it in the air or
Is it nothing but a black hole
Do you come back down or
Is it just
the end
by: Emma K. 6A
3 comments:
Emichka!
Congrats on a masterpiece! When I think of that topic myself I just get lost. I really nice way to express your feelings.
Marc L. :)
Emma,
That was really good and like marc said, at some points I got lost but at the next line it got me back in.
Good Job,
-Nini
emiieeeeee,
amazing stuff and i can understand where your coming from. I just didnt understand why ever few lines there was a bunch of jibberish(was that part of your poem? because if it was it wasnt actually jibberish)
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