You don't like it
when you can have it
But you want it
when it's gone
You don't care for it
when it's alone
Once something goes to it
you stare in envy
It's not important
when nothing cares
Once something takes interest
it's all you can think about
Marc L.
P.S. this poem is not done!
P.P.S. Please comment!
Thursday, February 21, 2008
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4 comments:
awesome poem marc
-arieh
Nice job marc just one thing, in the end maybe try and make it a bit more powerful and make it flow. Otherwise really good poem and i like the topic.
PS: Do you have a title?
Great poem mark just one thing, maybe in the end try and make it a bit more powerful and make it flow. Otherwise GREAT POEM!!! I really like the topic.
PS: Do you have a title?
wow marc that is such a great poem.I think that at the end you should give a little clue one what the thing is.I love the topic.
-mikaela
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