is this ending paragraph for my kamakzie essay ok
The Japanese invented this weapon for hatred, and I believe that is wrong. Death should be natural not by machines and bullets. Desperation should never be a reason to kill someone, or to kill your self. Thank you!
Wednesday, March 12, 2008
hi Mr. G is this ok
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Powerful words, Marko. This would be fine if your essay was about your opinion of Kamikaze. On the other hand, if your essay is about who the Kamikaze were, you should rework it.
Also, some people would disagree with your statements. Some saw the Kamikaze in a different way. Make sure to distinguish between your opinion and more unbiased facts.
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