Monday, May 26, 2008

friends

hey guys i just wrote this poem. so tell me what you think on it.

Friends

To hold and share,
to always be there.

To laugh and smile,
to stay for awhile.


To wear best friend rings,
or to tell private things.


Just hanging out,
that’s what friends are all about


Chillin in the sun,
or just having fun.



Wear the same trends,
or hanging out on the week ends.



Drinking smoothies,
or watching movies.


By making memories,
that last forever.

2 comments:

Melzz said...

Aleesha that was really good!
This poem has your personality in it so when i read it i knew you wrote it.
I liked how it was a rhyming poem and that in every two lines there was a rhyme that mae good sence

Good job Aleesha

vanessa said...

Wow!!! Good job Aleesha! I thought that this poem really related to what friends actually do. Also, the rhyming was a really good surprise, and made the poem ten times better!