Thursday, March 27, 2008

Wednesday, March 26, 2008

Sorry Mr. G.

hi guys do we have a hebrew test tomorrow.

RESPONCE TO LITTLE BOY

HI guys could you please comment on my poem

I like the poem the little boy because I think that it was fascinating at the end. Because the little boy's former teacher dulled his imagination. When the little boy got into his seat the teacher told the class that today we are going to draw pictures, yes said the little boy. "I like drawing pictures "so the little boy drew a picture but the teacher said wait, I will show you how to draw a flower with a stem. So the little boy liked his own so he decided to draw the teacher flower. Later in the years the little boy moved to another school and enjoyed his time at the new school. $$$$

RESPONCE TO FAT MAN

HI guys could you please comment on my poem.

This poem is about two men trying to hike up a mountain. One of the men criticizes the other man for the he looks, he wonders to himself how a fat man like him can get so fat and try to attempt to clime a mountain. When the fat man passes by he sees what is written on his tee-shirt, and fells ashamed of what he thought earlier. The point of this story is not to judge people by the way they look but by the way they are.

Monday, March 24, 2008

Japan presentations

About the Japan project, are we only allowed to use our source to find Japan information or can we use any source we like?


Thanks Danny

Japan Presentations

Hi Everyone,

Hope you're having an excellent weekend. Due to the Young Entrepreneurs Fair, our next Japan presentations will be on Wednesday. We should be finished all of group three by Wednesday. The fourth group should be ready for Thursday and the final group will present on Friday.

See you tomorrow.

Sunday, March 23, 2008

test

he guys do we have a little test on the science text book homework.

-mikaela

To answer sharons question...

1 C-

2 C

3 B

4 A

State your case!

Your part of the presentation was done, but didn’t show much of an effort

Your part of the presentation was done, and your presentation was clear and easy to understand

Your part of the presentation was done, and your presentation was clear, engaging (hooked the audience) and used some posters, baners or other eye catchers

You’ve created a presentation that was interesting to the audience, you’re your visual aids were eye catching, and your delivery was smooth and easy to understand

Did you do your job? (argue against other sources

You did your job of showing that your source is good

You did your job and showed proof about why your source is superior

You have strong evidence proving that your source is superior

Your proof is strong and you have lots of it. In addition, you have different kinds of proof

Did you do your job? (your source)

You made an argument against another source

You made a strong and clear argument against the other source

Your argument against the other source used evidence

Your argument against the other source was clear, showed evidence and demonstrated an escellent effort to shut down the competition

Hope that helped!

Japan rubric

Mr. Gelmon iam working on my japan project but i forgot the rubric at school can you put the rubric on the website

please put it as soon as possible
Sharon

Thursday, March 20, 2008

Response To Execution

Hi guys could you please comment on my poem

I can respond and connect to this poem because since the time I was born my grandma had past away from cancer. Not only did I never meet her but I never got to say goodbye. Sometimes my family goes to the cemetery and brings her flowers. Now, since my grandpa is lonely I often visit him and invite him for parties and dinners. We usually celebrate his birthday and his anniversary
at restaurants. One day I wish I could meet my grandma.



Response to someday

Hi guys could you please comment on my poem

I can not respond to this poem because I never experience playing a guitar and don't
know how to play any songs on a guitar. But I know how to make my own short songs that don't seem well. Maybe I could take guitar classes or ask my friends to tech me how to play or watch my friends play the guitar and ask them what is this note. Maybe one day I will know how to play a guitar and play other people songs or make up my own song.

sick,

hey guys everybody did amazing in the show last night but as some of you now im really sick today so if you could tell me the homework that would be great. thanks so much

-mikaela

Wednesday, March 19, 2008

School

Hey guys
When is frieght trains due?
sorry its on your site Mr. G bu its not on Mr. Lee's
nini

School

Hey guys
Is it a half day tomorrow????
Good luck on the play!!!
Nini

Good Luck on the play!

Hi grade six,

Just wishing everyone involved in the play a good luck tonight!

-Aviva

Tuesday, March 18, 2008

Can Drive Tomorrow!

  • Please bring in a cans of food for our Purim food drive tomorrow.

Sunday, March 16, 2008

Math

Does anyone know what the math homework was. I know you have to compare two things but when is it due and how comparisons do you have to do between the two topics.


max.

Football poem


Hey every body this is a poem that i wrote about football, i'm not sure if it is good or not,

please comment... ^_^



Life is like a football
easy to catch
easy to throw
but when it drops
you never know where
it
will
go