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Ren Ikeda had copious amounts of money
Ren Ikeda was a debonair swarthy cuff
Ren Ikeda had great amounts of pluck
Ren Ikeda lived athwart the brine
Ren Ikeda enjoyed vaunting about the money he plied
Ren Ikeda was dolefully gaudy and rarely fain gave a dower
Ren Ikeda avowed that what he did was not right
People never durst flout or chide Ren Ikeda
Ren Ikeda never dreamed of getting a guerdon
Dolefully when Ren Ikeda met Arch Fear
People realized Ren Ikeda had arrears
With rapture they fain through Ren Ikeda’s body into the brine
-Arieh
Thursday, December 13, 2007
Ren Ikeda
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Arieh,
You are like a mad scientist experimenting with, and mixing words to create the perfect potions. I used a dictionary for some of these words, because, alas, some of these words came even before my time.
I am continuously impressed with your range and your hunger to find new ways to express yourself.
Way to go you beltic wiht (Old English for: excellent person)
wow just wow i am so impressed. you out of most people is a true poet. you take your time and you look so hard to find the perfect to fit it. most people just write what comes to there head but you make your poems as different as can be!!
Jonah
Thanks guys for your comments they really mean a lot to me
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