Tuesday, February 26, 2008

the greatest poem ever

And the giant squid
the giant squid
came to America
to america
and lit up the sky
the ssssssskkkkkkkkkkkkkkyyyyyyyy
and america died
america died
he held us in his hand
in his hand
and crushed our land
crushed our land
he through us to the grinds
to the grinds
and BLEW
OUR
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yaaaaaaaaaaaa
yayayyayayayayayayayaaaaaaaaaaa
in his hand
in his hand
at a monstrous height
monstrous light
he blinded us
blinded us
with his
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8 comments:

Nini said...

Its funny...

Sam said...

Well Max and Benny the rhymes were good.

max said...

dear max i think that the song/poem was so good
i think max was better than benny because he is max and benny is benny
ok i will try convince max to write another
and this is for max
Max: you are super cool and better than benny
you are soo cool that you blow my mind
actually you are the coolest mon coolio to ever walk the earth

best wishes
the biggest little man

Adam Gelmon said...

Dear Max,

There comes a time in every teacher's career when he looks at his students' work and feels pride. This is not one of those times. I can't believe you misspelled the words "wrote" and "poem". Your punishment: two concrete poems filled with the words "poem" and "wrote" spelled properly. On my desk by Friday morning, please. Oh, and fix the spelling in your post before people think that you and Benny are illiterate. I guess I do applaud your creativity on this one.

Benny said...

SUCCESSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WOOT!!!! WOOT!!!!!!!!!!

YEAH!!!!

WE NEED A BAND NAME!!!!!!
PLEASE SUGGEST.

Marc L. said...
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max said...
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max said...

ENCORE.
ENCORE.
ENCORE.