music poem draft 1

I guys tell me how you like this poem. PLEASE! If anyone can give me ideas for a good title and some way to end the last stanza but still to keep it rhyming.

music through my ear

what else can I hear

with the bark

of linkin park

as I use the beat

of my feet

to dance along

to this awesome song

as I dance along

to this awesome song

I pass bye

and catch some eyes

as my ears are blasting

to this song that is ever lasting

I listen to the final words

and look outside at the birds

as the birds tweet away

to the beat that plays

the song ends