hey guys this is my first draft if you can comment that would be great thanks hope you like it
how do they do it
how can this be
writing a poem
just is not for me
as i look at the wall
and stare at the page
all i can think about
is my enoumouse rage
do they look straight ahead
do they get it from a chart
it seems that some people
can write poetry in the dark
but i have come to a conclution
it stings me like a bee
that writing poerty
just is not for me
-mikaela
Friday, December 14, 2007
it just is not for me
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3 comments:
WOW!!!! Nothing i didn't expect from you Mic. An amazing rhyming poem that actually made sense and was clear! Great job and I think you should expand it and make it longer!
Another job WELL DONE1
Marc L. :)
This was rlly amazing!!!! I rlly loved your concept and i loved how u were so discriptive and rlly explained why poetry is so hard. just one thing is that in the end of it when u said "it stings me like a bee" and then u ryhmed. did u mean to ryhme that stanza then maybe u should ryhme everythin. anyway rlly good job!!!!
ar-eeeeeeeeeee
Good Job!!! It was really good and funny because your the one who can write poetry. I agree with Marc, I think it shoud be a bit longer but short and sweet is good too.:)
~Nini~
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