Monday, February 11, 2008

3rd draft of horse poem

Hey guys, Heres draft 3, hope you like it.:) *And also, I decided to kind of make it like the movie "Spirit"- of how Canada and the U.S. had to get rid of all the animals to make our homes... Kind of emphasizing part of the horse's life.


Galloping through the tall green grass.

Letting the wind go through my tail,

And rustle between the hairs of my

Mane.



Playing games in the dry canyon walls,

to finding new places and adventures

through out my area.



I was the leader of the heard.

And with that job came responsibility.

A lot of it.


At some points I got really curious.

And at some points, too curious,

That's how I endangered the whole heard

and especially, my pride.


Plz. comment:) ~nini~

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