Danny's Bad paragraph

I always have such a blast at soccer practice, but last week our practice was rotten! To start off, our Mr. Cheerful coach turned into the devil himself, and as soon as we got on to the field, it started to pour rain everywhere. Our coach even made us complete five more exhausting laps then regular. My legs felt like jello and it was only twelve minutes into the practice. Just when I thought we would get a water break he made us do sprints and suicides for a ten-minute span I thought would never end. Now I know how it feels like to die!