hey grade six this is my new and improved poem please comment on it!
Listen
it's a beat
a rhythym
Listen
it's drums
an acoustic
Listen
feel and see
the beat
Listen
soprano and alto
sing to the beat
Listen
to the lyrics
to the words
Listen
just listen...
to the music
-Taya-
Tuesday, February 26, 2008
listen strike 2
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Hey~ You changed it! It flows a lot better now. Congratulations.
~Nomi, Grade 12, Lord Byng Secondary
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