Wednesday, October 17, 2007

Poetry Response by Tomer

This poem is about two men trying to hike up a mountain. One of the men criticizes the other man for the way he looked, he wonders to himself how a fat like him can get so fat and try to attempt to clime a mountain. when the fat man passes by he sees what is written on his tee-shirt, and feels ashamed of what he thought earlier. The point of this story is not to judge people by the way they look, but by the way they are.

5 comments:

Jonah said...

I liked it a lot because you showed the feelings in each character. You also described the saying "Don't judge a book by it's cover".

From Jonah

Melzz said...

good job tomer i really liek this response beacause you discribed how people shouldn't judge each other by the way they look but who they are inside.

from Melody

Arieh said...

i liked it alot because you expressed how you thought the characters were feeling

Aviva said...

you did a really good job emphasizing that you should not judge people by the way they look but who they are inside.

ME said...

Tomer,
You really showed us to judge something by what what it is on the inside not outside.

From: Jacob