Monday, January 5, 2009

Past & Present Paragrpahs

Present tense:

Right now I am watching T.V. A woman with bright purple hair just popped onto the screen. She is doing a really funny dance. I’m trying the dance but I trip on my shoelace and I am falling flat on my face.


Past Tense:

Last Saturday I was watching T.V. Suddenly a woman with bright purple hair popped onto the screen and did a really funny dance. I then decided to try the dance. What do you know as soon as I started I tripped over my shoelace and fell flat on my face.

Marc Levin 7B

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