Sunday, January 31, 2010

oren's dragon poem

We stare down.
To the deep bottom of the sandbox
from the steepest cliff in town.
We are almost at the bottom
Shrieking and screaming, at the top of our lungs. We feel something,
A gail of wind blows right at us, we are swept down instantly to the bottom.
We climb back up and start climbing down again.
We slide down the hole this time
as our feet touch the bottom
and boom! something went wrong.

2 comments:

Isobel said...

good job Oren!
Very descriptive!
Also I like the suspense!
-Is :)

maayan said...

really good !
this gave me a really good mental picture