We stare down. To the deep bottom of the sandboxfrom the steepest cliff in town. We are almost at the bottom Shrieking and screaming, at the top of our lungs. We feel something, A gail of wind blows right at us, we are swept down instantly to the bottom.We climb back up and start climbing down again.We slide down the hole this timeas our feet touch the bottom and boom! something went wrong.
Sunday, January 31, 2010
oren's dragon poem
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2 comments:
good job Oren!
Very descriptive!
Also I like the suspense!
-Is :)
really good !
this gave me a really good mental picture
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