Sam's Thoughts on Practically Triplets

Sensory images:

1, “a long and painful surgery” (line 6) - I could feel how painful the separation would be 

2, “Now, when you see me, you won’t even glance my way.” (lines 7-8) - I can see a girl purposely ignoring another girl, and I can imagine the other girl’s sadness.

3, “Tiny, stylish bikinis” (line 10) - I can see a group of fashion obsessed cocky girls.

“The shoe flinging game” (line 17) - I can almost hear the three girls laughing and giggling.

“Our crayon faces, mismatched and lopsided, looked nothing like our real ones.” (lines 30 - 32) - I can almost smell the crayon and see the the lopsided faces.

Line structure:

A lot of short, power lines like: 

“We were practically triplets,

 so close.” (lines 2 - 3 and 39 - 40)

and

“I stay underwater

so you won’t laugh at me.” (lines 14 - 15)

Stanzas:

Every stanza is close in size, expect for the last two.  They seem to be fading off like the girls’ relationship did.

Each stanza deals with a different time.

-Sam