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I went to swim in the ocean with my friends. We suddenly heard thunder. It started pouring rain. All I could think about twas getting back to land. The sound of the running water and thunder was driving me insane. I couldn’t find Ashley or Hana. I couldn’t see anybody. The salt in the water was getting in my mouth. The waves were crashing down on me, my legs were numb. I couldn’t move. I was slowly sinking. Why didn’t I tell my mom where I went?