Wednesday, January 27, 2010

Ashley's sensory image

All the sudden a huge flash of lightning filled the sky and then a roaring noise fled through the plane. I was on my way to Toronto with my friends, Isobel and Gabi for my birthday,so far we were NOT having a good time. It started to poor.Then it started to get really windy, everyone on board was very frightened considering how high we were.
I saw a part of the wing fly off and im sure most people on the plane were aware that, that had just happened and we were all going to die in the next little while. But we didnt something happened just before we crashed!

1 comment:

Isobel said...

I thought that was a great paragraph! There were lots of sensory language and you involved me and Gabi!!
-Is :)