I remember the day my dad took me to the beach , the beach was called ''Halo Beach''.
We walked to the beach on a saturday morning and arrived at 11:30 AM .
All of a sudden I see all these signs saying "Beware big waves " then there was another one saying "Big sharcks".I was scared to walk in but then i couldnt see my dad anymore .I started shivering and thinking what should I do next then i felt a big pinch then I didnt need to think anymore i was already in the stomache of a whale.
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Good job Neeve! That was excellent! You made a couple of no capitals on the "I"! Also maybe you could describe what it's like inside the whale!
Very good!
-Isobel :)
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