This year my birthday is very different. Last year in the the afternoon of my birthday there was a giant earthquake in Port-au-Prince Haiti were I lived. I still remember the rumbling and roaring as the earth shook while mine and many others houses collapsed. I was buried under about 1000 pounds of hard cement. My heart was pounding like a runner who has just won the world cup. I kept focused on two things I must survive and where is the rest of my family?
-By Barbie
Wednesday, January 27, 2010
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3 comments:
hey barbie
i liked the the paragraph because it kept me in suspense right from the beginning.
-yaakov
Barbie i thought that was excellent!
You related to something that's happening in the world that's very important!!!
-Is :)
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